please correct my english. i need your help!?
so all your schools were very close to your house except your uni.
i went to my kindergarten and elementary school on foot, i went to junior high school by bicycle. (but we were not allowed to go there by bicycle. we had to go there on foot)
i went to high school by train and bus.
it was very troblesome to use them to get there.
all of your famiy live in the same house, don't you?
will you get your house and take care of your parents in the future?
in japan 17 years old is still a very young age and most of them are still children as well.
but i guess, actually they are not young. as you and i thought "i am not a kid" when we were that age.
we are old people, that is why we could think they are very young. i guess.
when i was 17 years old, i went out with them. i was a very gaughty girl.
my parents and teachers advised me but i did not listen to them anything. i thought they were just annoying.
i reflected on the way i had behaved my past and felt ashamed.
It appears as if you are asking questions, and then answering them? Below, I've corrected your English and hope that I understood what you were trying to say. I've also given you some options that might be a more common way of formulating the sentence in English, but any way I've suggested is correct. Good luck!
So, all your schools were very close to your house except your university?
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So, were all of your schools very close to your house except your university?
I went to my kindergarten and elementary schools on foot.
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I walked to both my kindergarten and elementary schools.
I went to junior high school by bicycle (even though we were not allowed to ride our bikes and were supposed to go there by foot.)
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I rode my bicycle to junior high school (even though we were not allowed to ride our bikes and were supposed to walk to school.)
I went to high school by train and bus.
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I took both a train and a bus to high school.
It was very troublesome using them to get there.
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It was very troublesome having to use them both to get there (if you had to use them both on the same day.)
You and your family all live in the same house, don't you?
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Your family all lives in the same house, don't they?
In Japan, 17-years old is still considered to be a very young age and most of them are thought of as children, as well.
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In Japan, 17-years old is still a very young age and most people this age are still thought of as children, as well.
But, I guess, they are not actually young.
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But, I suppose they are not actually young.
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But, I believe they are not actually young.
Both you and I thought, “I am not a kid” when we were that age.
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You and I both thought, "I am not a kid" when we were that age.
We are old people, which is why we may think they are very young, I guess.
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........, I suppose.
When I was 17-years old, I went out with them. (YOU WENT OUT WITH WHO?) I was a very naughty girl. My parents and teachers advised me, but I did not listen to anything they said. I just thought they were annoying. Later, I reflected upon the way I had behaved in my past and felt ashamed.
If I didn't correctly understand what you were saying, please post here again and I'll try to check back later and help you some more.
JUNIOR BIKE
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